Character Design - Developed Shots

I'm liking what my scenes are forming now, I received some useful advice from Justin about Susie's character and I should focus on her a little bit more. The shots I've developed portray how small Bailey feels when she's overcome by Susie's darker behaviour which isn't common for how the way she usually acts.

Sketches of the shot, the school & Floorplan of Baileys room

Extra Gesture drawings of Bailey & Susie