Hey Meg - good, just in terms of concision, I wonder if you even need the looking in the other upstairs rooms before he opens the 'marital' room - you may not have time. Also - your script suggests that Arthur moves out of the house 'the next day' - but I don't this is credible - the script should suggest that it's 'some months later'.
Hey Meg - good, just in terms of concision, I wonder if you even need the looking in the other upstairs rooms before he opens the 'marital' room - you may not have time. Also - your script suggests that Arthur moves out of the house 'the next day' - but I don't this is credible - the script should suggest that it's 'some months later'.
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