Premise - First edited Improv Recording, Sample Recording & First edited Transcript/Script Draft

For this past week I've been fixing up on my audio as my last animatic was a complete one shot recording, after my feed back I have been attempting to introduce different emotions, tones and statuses through recordings. Overall, I have about 34 recordings, 25 of those are actually the recordings where I introduced this new method, the rest were the one takes from before.

A lot of people seem to like the big eye moment within the sequence, so while I work on my next animatic I'll be recycling that shot a long with others so I can better communicate it's importance through my voice a bit more.

Below is the First full edit conversation of those recordings complied together to mock up the whole sequence.

 

Here are a few samples from some that were used and some that were not used in the edited cut.

I also started writing a transcript of the recordings which I improved on while working on it and now it has turned more into a script. There is now a strong difference between the script and the recordings, I think for now I'll take what I need from recordings and try and re-apply it to the second script draft.